Tuesday, November 23, 2010

draft # 1 SUDDEN FICTION


Elijah Herbert
Novemeber 15th 2010
Sudden fiction

Martha and Kevin where expecting their baby girl in late November. When they brought these cute little pink shoes with pink ribbons, and sparkles with a little hello kitty doll on the side. But when the son graph came back it showed that their darling little baby was actually a boy. They couldn’t believe there luck up until that appointment they where sure that it was a girl but it showed other wise. As Kevin through about the dilemma he tripped over an old cello, and had an idea, he could still make money off of the shoes he paid 30 $ for. As he and Martha discussed this idea she doubled over in pain and let out a sudden shriek. Tear ran down her face as she clutched her stomach.
“babe whats wrong” kevin said bending over to help her up
“ my water broke “ she said looking quite stressed
“ are you sure”  kevin said taken aback by the agresiveness in he voice
“YESS” he said screaming at the top of lounges in pain .
kevin rushed in the house to get his keys to the mazorite an help martha into the car. Witheach passig moment she screamed an doubled over.kevin had to stop the car to help her into the back seat thinking that it would help if she laid down . when thy arived at the hospital she was imediatley takin to the emergency room for labor , Dr. Robinson would proform the labor.
“ sir where gonna have to ask you to step outside the room because quite frankly you don't look so well an it might make things worse.
“worse what do you mean whats wrong”
“we don't excaly know right now but we ae running test ,but it seems to me that shes have sextuplets”
“what the hell is….wait a minute do you mean that I might be having seven childern at one time doctor.
“yes that's what it seems like at the moment “
“is everything alright will she and the babys be fine”
“we don't know this kind of thing is very rare and this is the 1st time im allowed to deliver in  surgery”
when martha looked nervous and looked over to kevin for support but saw that he had fainted .

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