Elijah Herbert
Oct 16th 2010
6-word fiction: Dogs barking thief running bloody leg.
6-word memoir: you provide fuel to my fire.
6 sentence fiction: Martha and Kevin where expecting their baby girl in late November. When they brought these cute little pink shoes with pink ribbons, and sparkles with a little hello kitty doll on the side. But when the sonograph came back it showed that their darling little baby was actually a boy. They couldn’t believe there luck up until that appointment they where sure that it was a girl but it showed other wise. As Kevin through about the dilemma he tripped over an old cello as he opened hte garage , and had an idea, he could still make money off of the shoes he paid 30 $ for. As he and Martha discussed this idea she doubled over in pain and let out a sudden shriek.
Make sure to use punctuation to help your pieces. The 1st one: "Dogs barking; thief running; blonde leg." I don't understand the blonde leg part, though.
ReplyDelete2nd one: It's "fuel".
In the 3rd one..."sonogram". Where did the cello come from?
16/20
sorry
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